I like the chorus and bars. try not pushing it out and just feel the beat and it would be nice and smooth. it's tight and nice beat.
Bars: 7/10
Delivery: 7/10
Impression: 6/10
@MikeParker you are very right only thing i disagree with is the crisp voice. the roughness he has goes beyond good with the lyrics sang. and i like that the voice is that much louder than the beat cause yoy can hear the words better and it stands out. they hear you above the music.
Unknown you are fucking known bro!! Real shit mind left alone continually!!! I love this track bro!!! Like damn homie pulling on my heart...relatable and true. Thank you for this homie ππ―π
hey man this hook nice AF. was the hook part of the beat when you got it or do you know a dope female singer???
I think if I had to be super critical for you it would be based around your vocal sound. they dont sound as warm and crisp as they could, they sound like they are a touch rough or clipping a bit on the recording.
Flow is pretty sweet throughout this track, think there is a couple of breath points where you maybe tripped it up a tiny fraction and it makes the pause in between words a little bit awkward.
lyrics are nice and suit the track theme perfectly, got zero complaints about that at all.
Mixing wise you could lower the volume of your vocals to help them gel with the beat a bit more rather than just sitting on top of them.
overall man this track is super dope and if you could clean up production a little bit would be radio ready no questions asked.
as for all my feedback its super nit picking cause you asked it me to be and it was only super little flaws i found on it.
I always love your tracks bro the intro with hook is dope asf your bars are always hitting real topics and for that respect also your flows fire homie we need to collabo
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damn G! fye! and congrats on the feature! π«‘π―
Congratulations on your feature πΏπ―π―
I like the chorus and bars. try not pushing it out and just feel the beat and it would be nice and smooth. it's tight and nice beat. Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 6/10
I could listen to it anyday Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
Dude. Blown away. Thank you πβοΈ
@MikeParker you are very right only thing i disagree with is the crisp voice. the roughness he has goes beyond good with the lyrics sang. and i like that the voice is that much louder than the beat cause yoy can hear the words better and it stands out. they hear you above the music.
oooo you didnt tell me bout this one homie dayum no stop to this fuckerπππ
Unknown you are fucking known bro!! Real shit mind left alone continually!!! I love this track bro!!! Like damn homie pulling on my heart...relatable and true. Thank you for this homie ππ―π
we should collab... send me something like this
real af.. congrats for pic of the week!
Congrats on that pick of the week lil' homieππ
fuck Yea this gone clear fuck fire flow sick wordplay dope smooth delivery great π―π―π―π―π―πΆπΆπΆπΆβπβπβππ²π
wow . how can you make these nice musics?
hey man this hook nice AF. was the hook part of the beat when you got it or do you know a dope female singer??? I think if I had to be super critical for you it would be based around your vocal sound. they dont sound as warm and crisp as they could, they sound like they are a touch rough or clipping a bit on the recording. Flow is pretty sweet throughout this track, think there is a couple of breath points where you maybe tripped it up a tiny fraction and it makes the pause in between words a little bit awkward. lyrics are nice and suit the track theme perfectly, got zero complaints about that at all. Mixing wise you could lower the volume of your vocals to help them gel with the beat a bit more rather than just sitting on top of them. overall man this track is super dope and if you could clean up production a little bit would be radio ready no questions asked. as for all my feedback its super nit picking cause you asked it me to be and it was only super little flaws i found on it.
congratulations on pick of the week man! well deserved this is nice got me vibes goin!!
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this shit goez hard af!π₯π₯π₯πͺπͺπͺ
WOW bro you brilliant this beat HOMIE, I Return to A Master At WORK man nice work @unknown2u
Dope ass track π―π₯π₯
I always love your tracks bro the intro with hook is dope asf your bars are always hitting real topics and for that respect also your flows fire homie we need to collabo