surviving loneliness
In the shadows where the silence breathes, Heart heavy like the weight of broken dreams, Loneliness wrapped tight, it’s a cold embrace, Survival’s in the fight, but I’m lost in space. Echoes of my thoughts, they ricochet like bullets, Searching for a spark, but the darkness pulls it, Hiding from the light, like a ghost in the mist, Life’s a twisted game, and I’m stuck on the list. Voices in my head, they scream to be heard, Every whispered doubt, it’s a sharpened word, Walking through the storm, with my soul on the line, Each step that I take, it’s a battle divine. Pouring out my heart, in these verses I bleed, Loneliness the soil, and survival’s the seed, A warrior alone, but I’m fighting for peace, In the chaos of the night, I’m just searching for release.
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first time using anything like this sorry everyone
great bars and delivery keep up the good work
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