surviving loneliness
In the shadows where the silence breathes, Heart heavy like the weight of broken dreams, Loneliness wrapped tight, it’s a cold embrace, Survival’s in the fight, but I’m lost in space. Echoes of my thoughts, they ricochet like bullets, Searching for a spark, but the darkness pulls it, Hiding from the light, like a ghost in the mist, Life’s a twisted game, and I’m stuck on the list. Voices in my head, they scream to be heard, Every whispered doubt, it’s a sharpened word, Walking through the storm, with my soul on the line, Each step that I take, it’s a battle divine. Pouring out my heart, in these verses I bleed, Loneliness the soil, and survival’s the seed, A warrior alone, but I’m fighting for peace, In the chaos of the night, I’m just searching for release.
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In the shadows where the silence breathes, Heart heavy like the weight of broken dreams, Loneliness wrapped tight, it’s a cold embrace, Survival’s in the fight, but I’m lost in space. Echoes of my thoughts, they ricochet like bullets, Searching for a spark, but the darkness pulls it, Hiding from the light, like a ghost in the mist, Life’s a twisted game, and I’m stuck on the list. Voices in my head, they scream to be heard, Every whispered doubt, it’s a sharpened word, Walking through the storm, with my soul on the line, Each step that I take, it’s a battle divine. Pouring out my heart, in these verses I bleed, Loneliness the soil, and survival’s the seed, A warrior alone, but I’m fighting for peace, In the chaos of the night, I’m just searching for release.
first time using anything like this sorry everyone
great bars and delivery keep up the good work
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