Rival
Lyrics: My names lucas Im loosing focus Adhd made me ruthless Competition looking around looking clueless Im on a bike Your on a trike Now this rap bout to spike Stackz and rapz You dont know nothing like thatz Going for green Im in the dream Im only putting of steam Supreme Very extreme Ive got the laser beam scheme Im rapping like a machine Like its routine Im on the screen And thats very mean To come after me Yo look at your self your not that lean You look like you seen Mr. Bean As the queen In you make believe dream You think you’re on the winning team, But you’re just a walking meme You look like a duck Like are you stuck Why are you rolling around in the muck All you say is cluck cluck When you pick up the mike the whole audience sits down You rap like a clown Your whole fan base is probably called the frown You say your a king What a king with no crown Pipe down I wouldnt call you my rival Im vital To your survival But at my arrival You call me your idol This is my first rap is it good?
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Lyrics: My names lucas Im loosing focus Adhd made me ruthless Competition looking around looking clueless Im on a bike Your on a trike Now this rap bout to spike Stackz and rapz You dont know nothing like thatz Going for green Im in the dream Im only putting of steam Supreme Very extreme Ive got the laser beam scheme Im rapping like a machine Like its routine Im on the screen And thats very mean To come after me Yo look at your self your not that lean You look like you seen Mr. Bean As the queen In you make believe dream You think you’re on the winning team, But you’re just a walking meme You look like a duck Like are you stuck Why are you rolling around in the muck All you say is cluck cluck When you pick up the mike the whole audience sits down You rap like a clown Your whole fan base is probably called the frown You say your a king What a king with no crown Pipe down I wouldnt call you my rival Im vital To your survival But at my arrival You call me your idol This is my first rap is it good?
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👏 Great work! Keep up the awesome vibes! 🎶 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Dropping heat that keeps the whole game awake! 💡
Bro, you crushed it! Delivering heat as always! 🔥