lemme get some input, im trying to perfect this song

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lemme get some input, im trying to perfect this song

i know i got a long way to go but i need imput and ideas pleasseethis the type of shit you just can't reach out and grab it Either Do or you dont havee ittt bitch im born wit it wake up thank the lord wit it if ya hate me den gimme a demonstration ain't you say you had a Ak 47 ain you say you did a bid up state so shank me with that sword nigga nobody waved a wand bitch i started out average it took me practice after practice jus ta add up dis math , jus ta get back ta where i was at so i could master this craft high as fuck sweating my ass off of in my attic wit dis pen ta dis pad this life shit get intense that's why I get bent and bad bitches get smashed and actually this trailer park trash personality part of my mentality so why the fuck would I let these simple ass sarcastic bastards knock off track cus as far as I can see this is a fuckin masterpiece shook an im trippin again and again and its sad all that it it took was couple of judgmental looks from a fucked up wa la bitch it ain't no magic tada, nigga dissappear ain't that tragic haha, ion know da facts exactly, but I heard he got distracted talkin trash and Dat magic shit trapped em in a casket focus on this track, no crashing dont loose focus, eyes wide open i AIN gone zone in on distractions honing in my skills for rappin really it's my only passion you with or you ain't bitch this ain't no Game better be ready ta stand ten toes and bang I've never been better and I don't plan on on changing I reckon my record will speak for itself in explaining im crazy now listen up good cus I try to refrain from repeating myself and I hate making statements no I'll never sell my soul ta Satan but I want you to remember the day when I said that the whole fuckin world is gonna remember my name OK somebody say it OK mr.Dunn, so how in the world could you possibly know that your gonna be famous? ima say it just like I said it in the beginning whe. I was 16 and nobody listened, im destined for Greatness don't give a fuck how anyone takes yes I know im Caucasian it's 2026 a new generation, the only Race with a Role to play In my life is the one to the finish line did you get it? what i did right there with the.. never-mind cus if you didn't get it your a different type ignorant piece of shit with a different eye im on a different vibe on a simple mission an im sent from God yes I sin but I beg forgiveness blessed cus the fact that I'm still living standing up speaking with perfect percission, even though all of the physical mental and abusive shit that I been through through the heart attack, all the over doses, and the 7 years spent in prisons God bare witness ta this testament blessed be the king that rescued me pushed me an kept on pressing me me until I reached a level of strength to take on every single, devil and demon if an whenever they testing me I've learned my lessons, im truly blessed and I'll never lettem get the best of me the world's the kitchen, God's my Chef now im the lead with the recipe with the proper etiquette and techniques ' they prolly gonna end up blessing me with a Michelin star for whipping it up in da kitchen like dis an switching it up an then flip it again it's amazing tha way you can get a head spinnin, with a couple prayers and risky decisions sent to the man upstairs with perfect percission with a whole lot of love and a whole lotta faith from a man on a mission, Hell bent ta get to heaven intentions is pure, just handling business without any disrespect intended I could never in lifespan follow any man with a plan of canceling Christmas, God as my witness I know that I've sinned im use to it as usual I come to you humbly begging forgiveness a clueless fool the truth is im sick of all the devils intrusions all of his tricks and all his illusions all of his menacing students and pupils with only the ill of intent patiently waiting yet again on the dark side attempt to seduce, we can go at it again and again, but i promise you this , you'll never recruit me ain't you heard? I God on my side, you heard me correctly, nothing but positive vibes ?okokkkkkkkkkkkkk km kkkkkklkkkkkkkkkkklkkkk0

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i know i got a long way to go but i need imput and ideas pleasseethis the type of shit you just can't reach out and grab it Either Do or you dont havee ittt bitch im born wit it wake up thank the lord wit it if ya hate me den gimme a demonstration ain't you say you had a Ak 47 ain you say you did a bid up state so shank me with that sword nigga nobody waved a wand bitch i started out average it took me practice after practice jus ta add up dis math , jus ta get back ta where i was at so i could master this craft high as fuck sweating my ass off of in my attic wit dis pen ta dis pad this life shit get intense that's why I get bent and bad bitches get smashed and actually this trailer park trash personality part of my mentality so why the fuck would I let these simple ass sarcastic bastards knock off track cus as far as I can see this is a fuckin masterpiece shook an im trippin again and again and its sad all that it it took was couple of judgmental looks from a fucked up wa la bitch it ain't no magic tada, nigga dissappear ain't that tragic haha, ion know da facts exactly, but I heard he got distracted talkin trash and Dat magic shit trapped em in a casket focus on this track, no crashing dont loose focus, eyes wide open i AIN gone zone in on distractions honing in my skills for rappin really it's my only passion you with or you ain't bitch this ain't no Game better be ready ta stand ten toes and bang I've never been better and I don't plan on on changing I reckon my record will speak for itself in explaining im crazy now listen up good cus I try to refrain from repeating myself and I hate making statements no I'll never sell my soul ta Satan but I want you to remember the day when I said that the whole fuckin world is gonna remember my name OK somebody say it OK mr.Dunn, so how in the world could you possibly know that your gonna be famous? ima say it just like I said it in the beginning whe. I was 16 and nobody listened, im destined for Greatness don't give a fuck how anyone takes yes I know im Caucasian it's 2026 a new generation, the only Race with a Role to play In my life is the one to the finish line did you get it? what i did right there with the.. never-mind cus if you didn't get it your a different type ignorant piece of shit with a different eye im on a different vibe on a simple mission an im sent from God yes I sin but I beg forgiveness blessed cus the fact that I'm still living standing up speaking with perfect percission, even though all of the physical mental and abusive shit that I been through through the heart attack, all the over doses, and the 7 years spent in prisons God bare witness ta this testament blessed be the king that rescued me pushed me an kept on pressing me me until I reached a level of strength to take on every single, devil and demon if an whenever they testing me I've learned my lessons, im truly blessed and I'll never lettem get the best of me the world's the kitchen, God's my Chef now im the lead with the recipe with the proper etiquette and techniques ' they prolly gonna end up blessing me with a Michelin star for whipping it up in da kitchen like dis an switching it up an then flip it again it's amazing tha way you can get a head spinnin, with a couple prayers and risky decisions sent to the man upstairs with perfect percission with a whole lot of love and a whole lotta faith from a man on a mission, Hell bent ta get to heaven intentions is pure, just handling business without any disrespect intended I could never in lifespan follow any man with a plan of canceling Christmas, God as my witness I know that I've sinned im use to it as usual I come to you humbly begging forgiveness a clueless fool the truth is im sick of all the devils intrusions all of his tricks and all his illusions all of his menacing students and pupils with only the ill of intent patiently waiting yet again on the dark side attempt to seduce, we can go at it again and again, but i promise you this , you'll never recruit me ain't you heard? I God on my side, you heard me correctly, nothing but positive vibes ?okokkkkkkkkkkkkk km kkkkkklkkkkkkkkkkklkkkk0

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