poinsett-breeze-(remastered)

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The Drewest

3 months ago

alright, you asked. I can hear you very well, I like your lyrics and your delivery is ok. so, if I had to make any suggestions it would be there. firstly, emphasize your rhymes. it makes them hit harder. put a bit of emotion in your voice, this is all basically in the same tune. if your not feeling it, we aren't. don't be afraid to pause for a second in the middle of your verse if it means the delivery is on point. practice, practice, practice. record the song 5o times if you have to to make it sound the way you'd like. lastly, play it through your cars speakers before publishing, that way you can hear if it sounds good to bump and cruise 💯🔥🙏😎 there's you go buddy, take it easy now

Drastik7

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Mr.Loaf

3 months ago

Dig it 👏 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

👑 Queen Fadzdartist 💎

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

TrueJ

3 months ago

Loving the beats! 🎵💯 You're killin' it! Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥