I really liked the instrumental. It has a lively brass-band/funk-jazz feel with a lot of personality, and you have a natural sense of rhythm and timing. Your flow stays on beat and the lyrics aren’t bad, but I’d work on making the writing more memorable and using the different pockets in the instrumental more. There’s a solid foundation here; stronger punchlines and a better vocal balance would help the song stand out more.
Top strengths:
Instrumental, Flow
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I really liked the instrumental. It has a lively brass-band/funk-jazz feel with a lot of personality, and you have a natural sense of rhythm and timing. Your flow stays on beat and the lyrics aren’t bad, but I’d work on making the writing more memorable and using the different pockets in the instrumental more. There’s a solid foundation here; stronger punchlines and a better vocal balance would help the song stand out more. Top strengths: Instrumental, Flow
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