City

Greta Otoide

Author

5 months ago

I see you in the cities, shining through the lights, Crowds all around you, but you still catch my eyes. Do they know you’re different? Do they see what I see? In a world full of faces, you’re the only one for me. Pre-Chorus Are you with me, baby, when the music fades away? When the night gets quiet, are you really gonna stay? Chorus I see you in the cities, do they know you with me? Are you with me, baby? Girl, you with me, baby? Through the noise and the neon, where we’re meant to be, If you’re walking that road, come and walk it with me. Bridge No matter where we’re going, no matter how far, We don’t need directions — we can follow the stars.

Traco 241

5 months ago

keep up the G work gng, love to see more of it

O.D.O. Wanny

5 months ago

Your potential is limitless, keep creating! 🌌 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Rap Fame A&R

5 months ago

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