School Shooters
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Written emo hip hop rap poem poetry spoken word Rip Nick Hollis AKA Earnie Ca$h he died from gun violence I’m just trying to keep his memory alive please check him out on YouTube SoundCloud I Tunes i would greatly appreciate it even if you don’t support my shitty music/poetry thank you to everyone who supports me even if you’re not a fan thanks to whoever listens from start to finish
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Written emo hip hop rap poem poetry spoken word Rip Nick Hollis AKA Earnie Ca$h he died from gun violence I’m just trying to keep his memory alive please check him out on YouTube SoundCloud I Tunes i would greatly appreciate it even if you don’t support my shitty music/poetry thank you to everyone who supports me even if you’re not a fan thanks to whoever listens from start to finish
good message young one but you can't get a point like that across as you want if you promote guns at the same time. understand it's a double edged sword you have to separate those principles Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Yo @xraythecreep4677, We listened to your track 'School Shooters ', here's our report! 📝 Track Artwork ⭐️ Track Length ⭐️ Title ✅ Description ✅ Bars ✅ Cadence/Flow ✅ Delivery 🛠 Vibe ✅ Concept ✅ Trending ⭐️ Recording Quality 🛠 Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎 ⭐ - Feature Worthy ✅ - Good Start 🛠 - Needs Improvement
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Elevating with each release! Your growth is crystal clear in the beats. 📈🎵 Proud of you let’s grow LIT 🔥 Keep grinding ✊ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 💪 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
FIRE 🔥 FIRE 🔥 this is a slam 🔥💯 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
This nigga name is the creep 😂😂😂😂 Tag This ⭐ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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I can hear the beats behind the music and sounds pretty good. You guys sound pretty good but I came to reality I myself No I’m not the greatest myself but this is not it…
stay on beat bro!! Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
U need to go to Brazil bro. It will change ur life. 🕺 FIRE 🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Advice- find a plot of your song and add 2-3 sub plots that fit the song , get a beat you f with,then take the time to know your beat and find a flow that fits it. Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
The name is crazy but I like the WOW EFFECT KEEP GOING BRO follow me on Instagram @barefvcegod Impression: Perfect 💯
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needs work on the flow in the first verse
contentliked it seriously wrap in front of the mirror in order to get your flow down that's what I did seriously for months just to tip not judging you sound clean your bars have got skill and content Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯