Since youโre new let me tell you how rap fame works. All the people that put perfect on your track donโt actually think youโre perfect. We just put a rating down to move on to the next track to get more and more likes. With that being said let me give a REAL critique.
I can barely hear what youโre saying but from what I can hear the rhymes and cadence are very very ABC. Sounds like you started rapping last week. No punchlines, no wordplay, no substance . The delivery is really choppy . Youโre saying the same rhymes over and over and itโs not completing an actual thought . Stop freestyling and actually take time to write rhymes. Work on your craft you got a long way to go
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Since youโre new let me tell you how rap fame works. All the people that put perfect on your track donโt actually think youโre perfect. We just put a rating down to move on to the next track to get more and more likes. With that being said let me give a REAL critique. I can barely hear what youโre saying but from what I can hear the rhymes and cadence are very very ABC. Sounds like you started rapping last week. No punchlines, no wordplay, no substance . The delivery is really choppy . Youโre saying the same rhymes over and over and itโs not completing an actual thought . Stop freestyling and actually take time to write rhymes. Work on your craft you got a long way to go
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