if I can't rap I Don't want to breathe no Air to breathe I'd rather be 6 feet deep

🔥 Let’s gooo — love that energy. For this next version, let’s make it hit harder rhythmically — more Slim Shady meets NF meets Kendrick: aggressive but conscious. I’ll pack it with punchlines, multisyllabic rhymes, and internal reflections, but keep that spiritual awakening story intact. Think of this as “Beyond the Flesh (Version II – Ascension Flow).” --- 🎧 Title: “Ascension Flow” [Intro] Yeah… I had to die to my desires just to start to live. Transcendence ain’t peace, it’s perspective. Let’s elevate. --- [Verse 1 – The Earthly Pull] I was a slave to my cravings, my chains were invisible, Prayin’ for miracles, livin’ residuals, typical. Pinnacle of cynical — spiritual minimal, Feastin’ on flesh while my soul was pitiful. Everything glittered, I figured it’s gold, But the richer I got, the sicker my soul. I was scrollin’ through goals that the world sold bold, ‘Til I broke that mold, now I’m pure — uncontrolled. Every want was a haunt in disguise of ambition, Every thought was a plot in a mental prison. Had to listen to the silence, my own intuition, To see that desire was the real addiction. --- [Hook – The Uplift] I broke free from the need to be seen, Now I breathe what I am — not the man I’d been. No more hunger, no greed, no sheen, I’m aligned with the divine — serene, unseen. Yeah, I rose past the noise, detached from the mess, I’m alive in the void — beyond the flesh. --- [Verse 2 – The Breaking Point] I was drownin’ in illusion, confusion’s a drug, Hugged my delusion like it’s somethin’ to love. Had the plug — but it’s pullin’ me deeper instead, What’s success if you stressed with a crown on your head? I bled through my pride, died to my ego, Now I’m free, bro — no mask, no placebo. It’s peaceful when you see through the see-through, I found God in the mirror, not the steeple. Now I’m channelin’ the cosmos, rhyme as mantra, Flow like tantra, calm like Shambha. Used to chase after stars for the answers, Now I shine from within — self-mastered. --- [Hook – The Uplift] I broke free from the need to be seen, Now I breathe what I am — not the man I’d been. No more hunger, no greed, no sheen, I’m aligned with the divine — serene, unseen. Yeah, I rose past the noise, detached from the mess, I’m alive in the void — beyond the flesh. --- [Verse 3 – Transcendence Unfolded] Now my hunger’s gone ghost — I’m fed by existence, Peace ain’t a distance, it’s a shift in persistence. Resistance was the prison, now I’m pure in intention, Life’s a mirror — every fear was reflection. I ain’t chasin’ illusions or pursuin’ confusion, I’m infused with union, truth — no delusion. The higher I climb, the less I consume, Now my silence speaks louder than any room. Energy infinite, synergy intimate, Livin’ deliberate, pivotin’ limitless. From greed to grace — I changed my address, Now I live in the sky — beyond the flesh. --- [Outro – Spoken / Fast Flow Option] Yo, I had to burn my desire to feel fire inside, Detach from the wires that conspired my mind. The climb ain’t outside — it’s designed in the spine, When you silence the lies, the divine aligns. Man’s world fades — I’m the truth that’s left, Not dead, just breath — beyond the flesh. --- Would you like the next version to: 1️⃣ Be even faster and punchier — full Slim Shady triple-time aggression? or 2️⃣ Be more poetic and cinematic, like a story of awakening with heavy imagery (almost spiritual movie vibe)?