brand new girl
[Intro] Yeah... this one for the one who said “forever,” Then vanished like forever had an end. I don’t need closure, I found peace in my mirror. Let’s talk. --- [Verse 1 – Story Start / Pain] He came outta nowhere, felt like fate hit twice, Had me blushin’ over texts, talkin’ ‘bout a better life. Told me “you my world,” made me feel so chosen, Then left me cold, heart cracked but never frozen. He knew I was hurtin’, knew my family pain, Still played me like a game, left me standin’ in the rain. Told me “marry me,” had me thinkin’ that’s forever, But forever turned short when he changed like the weather. He said I’m his peace — nah, I was his fix, Now he out playin’ victim, tellin’ stories in the mix. --- [Pre-Hook] He act like he don’t miss me, but he watch my page, Scrollin’ through my pics, trapped in his own cage. Sayin’ “I’m good,” but I know he lyin’, If he so unbothered, why he still spyin’? --- [Hook] I’m glad he left, yeah I said it with pride, He couldn’t handle me, couldn’t match my vibe. He broke me down but I built from the pain, Now I walk through the fire like I own the flame. --- [Verse 2 – Realization / Savage Energy Rises] He thought I’d chase him, nah boy, I’m grown, I don’t beg for love, I build my own throne. Every girl he touch, try be my clone, But you can’t copy a queen that’s self-owned. He said he better off? Please, be for real, You lost a diamond tryna flex with steel. Now I see his stories, all cap, no truth, Tryna heal his ego, but he can’t fix his youth. My girls laugh, say, “he still talkin’ ‘bout you,” Yeah, he actin’ brand new but he miss that view. He thought he played me — nah, he played himself, I moved on, found peace, found wealth. --- [Bridge – Emotional Power] I ain’t soft no more, I turned pain to power, Ain’t cryin’ in no bed, I’m bloomin’ like a flower. He said “you’ll regret me,” boy, I’m relieved, You the reason I saw what I really need. Ain’t no half-love, I want deep roots, truth, A man that’s loyal, real, and smooth. Not a boy on a bonnet, tryna act hard, While real men rise, he just playin’ his part. --- [Hook – Harder Flow] Glad he left, he just cleared my lane, Now I’m top speed, never stuck in pain. I’m the one that he pray to see again, But I’m too high up, outta his range. --- [Verse 3 – Savage Queen Mode] I’m the one that got away, he’ll never find better, All these new girls? Just my old letters. He said I wasn’t enough — now I laugh at that, ‘Cause he lost his blessing, that’s a straight fact. I’m the best he’ll meet, the one that got him shook, He peek at my stories, can’t help but look. I’m the reason his next girl insecure, He compare every move, but she ain’t pure. He told me lies with a smile so clean, But I’m sharper now — I see through the scheme. He wanted a soft girl, I’m made of flame, I burn too bright to be tamed by his name. --- [Verse 4 – Reflection & Power] Now I wake up, skin glow, mind clear, I thank the past but I don’t live there. He lost me, but I found myself, Now I’m rich in spirit, not just wealth. He can flex his car, his chain, his crew, But deep down, he know the truth — I’m the view. I’m the one that taught him love ain’t free, And now he gotta live with losin’ me. --- [Hook – Final Version] Yeah I’m glad he left, I ain’t lookin’ back, He taught me pain but I flipped the track. I’m too much woman for a boy that small, Now I stand tall — queen, crown, and all. --- [Outro – Spoken Real Talk] You said forever, then ghosted without reason, Guess I was just your lesson, not your season. But thank you — ‘cause now I see, I need a man that can handle me. So go play tough, go front for the crowd, I’m still the name you whisper out loud. You lost the best — I don’t gotta pretend, You broke me once, but I broke the end.
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🚀 Incredible first track! More greatness to come! 🎵 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Let's GOOO 🍿 HEAT 🥵 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯