freestyle

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If I could focus the daydream Stop with the bullshit Had about enough Hate to be the one to break the bad news I threw it all away with the chemicals I hate to be the one But man I’m on a run Hit the waste gate Time to overthink Chemicals I can taste Audio sound waves Collective restraint Digital mindfrime Reality waits The binge and the purge My disperse in a binary fashion The planets collide Deep into the dust I’m running out of time The night settles in Waiting on the train…… Let’s begin….. To take an underground track Let the mainstream see What my destiny becomes Could never change the way i be Focus on the track Side of something meaning more Take the pain I felt before and make a doorway Time to make a plan Blueprints of sand In the glass falling down Keeping track of time Leaking out the rhymes in my mind Intertwined with the times that I tried This is a demo A demolition derby in the dust Every rhyme I bust Every drop of lust Gets connected with the love So i abbreviated pain And made a track to fly above But there’s another way out Feathers covered in clouds Lovers tangled in weaves Something inside me Showing me pathetic Hypothetic embedded I bet it together we never had A sour taste in our mouth From the radio lemon drop I don’t stop till my point gets heard Life lesson volume 1 I’ll dumb it up a bit Your born and then you die Same shit different day It’s a tragedy But living your life is the remedy The rest of it was a freestyle, so I apologize that I didn’t write it down. I’m hoping this will make some noise, maybe

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Bobby G

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10 months ago

Wyte Mic

9 months ago

Your transitions sound more like you’re falling off than completing a scheme , it seems like you’re most focused on rhyming, then creating a song, your emotional energy fluctuates, and so does your delivery throughout. Most obviously you’re recordings and song is not Studio quality and you need a lot of work in that department. What’s easiest for you to do that? You haven’t is create a quality artwork and description for your song.

SUMMERTIME TOLLZ

7 months ago

I'm definitely familiar with insanity 😆 your rhyme was good add some effort to the ending ,thank God for phone apps right? where else could this kind of quality live? Merry Christmas to you and your family

SUMMERTIME TOLLZ

7 months ago

waiting to see what your destiny becomes at 50 years old is insane 😅

F. Bailey Jr.

8 months ago

nice ass freestyle broski. hey I sent you a crew invite too. trying to make one. all I needed to hear was this last one you uploaded STR8 💯

prince N

10 months ago

nice track 👍 love it cool cool i feel it 👍

Drastik7

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥