Help Me

Internet.

8 years ago

this shit wack bro

Rsg Twon Teezy

8 years ago

🔥🔥Go Peep Me Out!!!🔥🔥

Utsav Sharma

8 years ago

get ur flow improved

Lime

Author

9 years ago

thanks for the advice I appreciate it thank you

Mike Twiss

9 years ago

Google rhyme schemes and start understanding and practicing the 5 main schemes and master them. That will help in future writing of tracks.

Mike Twiss

9 years ago

Timing could be a bit better. These things work together to create the flow of the lines with the beat.

Mike Twiss

9 years ago

With that said please take this constructively. Your delivery needs some work. It sounds like you are reading slowly and pausing a lot between words which makes it sound generic and robotic.

Mike Twiss

9 years ago

Looks like you got your promo game up with the looks of your vote count. I have trouble with promo for whatever reason

chop

9 years ago

this is that fiyaaa

Lime

Author

9 years ago

and yeah couches are heavy lol thanks

Ben215Grimes1

9 years ago

Ya eyes always ya voice gd shit

👀V!5!0N👀

9 years ago

nice track dawg it's dope

👀V!5!0N👀

9 years ago

Damn that second verse went hard

👀V!5!0N👀

9 years ago

dope 1st verse 🎤🎧🔫

👀V!5!0N👀

9 years ago

this is good so far still listening

Tremeks

9 years ago

I like this track, other is low quality

Tremeks

9 years ago

HELP ME NOW, WHEN MY BEER IS EMTY

PR💣💣F

9 years ago

I see u homie, we all need a lil help sometimes

Xeno Grief

9 years ago

fire music man 🤘

Richard Flint III

9 years ago

sounds good man. deep