nonyie life
sa panahon puno ng lungkot tinatanong sakin sarili kong bakit ganito ang mundo pagod puyat at lahat genawa kuna para ma dagdagan ang sweldo pero kahit dinadaya na pinipilit parin para lamang maka tulong sa pamilya ko na kahit kaylan man ay di pading maka ahon sa kahirapan ng buhay pwede mag pahinga pero bawal sumuko kahit napaka raming pag subok ng buhay kaya humihiling sa dyos na sanay patibayin mopako nasay makaya kopato kahit na walang ma ibili ng ulam umoutang nalang sa kaibigan para lamang makakain ng kanin kaya kayo na bahala sakin mahal kong panginuon dahil ikaw lang ang aking sandalan sa lahat ng problima pero salamat padin dahil binigyan moko ng ganitong trabaho kahit na maliit ang sahod pero mag iipon padin kahit maliit ang sahod
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