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The silence is screaminā, my demons are feedinā on every last word that I thought I was needināā¦ Thought itād get better but I was just dreaminā Never did shit right was always the one scheminā Tha more that I smoke the more I be Feeninā āØEvery "I'm sorry" I hid, every "I love you" Iād dismissāØThis mental prison, the walls startinā to thin But the ghost in the corner just grins at my sin, let me beginā¦The lead in my chest, a soul beinā pressed By the weight of the words that I never addressed Conversations on pause, stuck in a messy ass web Regrets on the phone that I never let connect, what the heck?Iām talkinā ābout last looks, the chapters I never closed..The love that I ghosted, the trust I disposed the beef that we fostered ātil the friendship just eroded now my mental is loaded with scenes that just get reloaded, itās codedā¦This pain is a coat, Iām zipped in the lining,Sunshine? Iām findinā that sign is a lie, man, Iām dyinā infinite void where the light is resigninā Just me and the shadows and thoughts Iāve been sidinā with, hidinā in. Navigatinā the night, this chaotic-ass peace Where the sorrow donāt cease and the hurt donāt release iām tossinā and turninā, these blankets a trap Replayinā the past, every mishap, every lapse, i collapsedā¦Coulda, shoulda, wouldaās, the devilās favorite slang A never-endinā game where the rules never change Iām stalked by the echoes of a final "goodbye" The tear in your eye that I acted too sly to decry, tell me whyā¦Iām shackled to moments, the times I got shook The pages I never took the time to go look The bond that I broke with the strength that I took Now my spirit is shook, Iām a prisoner of my own notebook, damn, itāsā¦Heavy, the grey is my permanent hue Canāt see no tomorrow, only what I aināt do This sorrowās a current, pullinā my vessel right through āØIām drowninā in memories, tryna find a residueā¦ of the truth. Every choice I made, dawg, left a scar that's deep and raw, nah ain't no escapin' this, it's just my own damn mental draw Stuck in this loop of terror, paralyzed by self-inflicted flawāØJust me and my reflections, caught in my own personal brawl This weight on my shoulders, fam, heavy like a ton of bricks prayin' for some peace of mind, swear I'm tired of these damn tricksāØJust wanna lay this burden down, escape these painful flicks But the past ain't lettin' go, keep playin' all its wicked licks So I just walk these halls, man, in my head, 'til the break of day Replayin' every moment, every word I didn't say The ghost still grinnin', fam, cuz the devil and his demons are winnin ā As long as we keep sinninā My wheels in my head never stop spinninā My past sins I keep hidden Knowing tha things I did are forbidden Acting like life was a joke 9 outta 10 commandments I broke So stayinā highs how I cope Knowinā Heaven for me thereās no hope I hung myself and really tightened tha rope The devil was sellin thereās no denyingā Sin after sin I kept buyinā Look in my eyes youāll see Iām not lyinā No time for sorry no tears left for cryinā Getting high just to keep passin the timinā Iād Pray for forgiveness but God stopped replyinā
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The silence is screaminā, my demons are feedinā on every last word that I thought I was needināā¦ Thought itād get better but I was just dreaminā Never did shit right was always the one scheminā Tha more that I smoke the more I be Feeninā āØEvery "I'm sorry" I hid, every "I love you" Iād dismissāØThis mental prison, the walls startinā to thin But the ghost in the corner just grins at my sin, let me beginā¦The lead in my chest, a soul beinā pressed By the weight of the words that I never addressed Conversations on pause, stuck in a messy ass web Regrets on the phone that I never let connect, what the heck?Iām talkinā ābout last looks, the chapters I never closed..The love that I ghosted, the trust I disposed the beef that we fostered ātil the friendship just eroded now my mental is loaded with scenes that just get reloaded, itās codedā¦This pain is a coat, Iām zipped in the lining,Sunshine? Iām findinā that sign is a lie, man, Iām dyinā infinite void where the light is resigninā Just me and the shadows and thoughts Iāve been sidinā with, hidinā in. Navigatinā the night, this chaotic-ass peace Where the sorrow donāt cease and the hurt donāt release iām tossinā and turninā, these blankets a trap Replayinā the past, every mishap, every lapse, i collapsedā¦Coulda, shoulda, wouldaās, the devilās favorite slang A never-endinā game where the rules never change Iām stalked by the echoes of a final "goodbye" The tear in your eye that I acted too sly to decry, tell me whyā¦Iām shackled to moments, the times I got shook The pages I never took the time to go look The bond that I broke with the strength that I took Now my spirit is shook, Iām a prisoner of my own notebook, damn, itāsā¦Heavy, the grey is my permanent hue Canāt see no tomorrow, only what I aināt do This sorrowās a current, pullinā my vessel right through āØIām drowninā in memories, tryna find a residueā¦ of the truth. Every choice I made, dawg, left a scar that's deep and raw, nah ain't no escapin' this, it's just my own damn mental draw Stuck in this loop of terror, paralyzed by self-inflicted flawāØJust me and my reflections, caught in my own personal brawl This weight on my shoulders, fam, heavy like a ton of bricks prayin' for some peace of mind, swear I'm tired of these damn tricksāØJust wanna lay this burden down, escape these painful flicks But the past ain't lettin' go, keep playin' all its wicked licks So I just walk these halls, man, in my head, 'til the break of day Replayin' every moment, every word I didn't say The ghost still grinnin', fam, cuz the devil and his demons are winnin ā As long as we keep sinninā My wheels in my head never stop spinninā My past sins I keep hidden Knowing tha things I did are forbidden Acting like life was a joke 9 outta 10 commandments I broke So stayinā highs how I cope Knowinā Heaven for me thereās no hope I hung myself and really tightened tha rope The devil was sellin thereās no denyingā Sin after sin I kept buyinā Look in my eyes youāll see Iām not lyinā No time for sorry no tears left for cryinā Getting high just to keep passin the timinā Iād Pray for forgiveness but God stopped replyinā
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