(Verse 1) Yeah, I rise from the ashes, streets filled with pain, Dark days in the shadows, struggling to maintain, Hustl
(Verse 1) Yeah, I rise from the ashes, streets filled with pain, Dark days in the shadows, struggling to maintain, Hustlin’ in the alleys, where hope's hard to find, Dreams crushed by the weight, but I’m still on my grind. (Verse 2) Kids playin’ in the dirt, while the rich stay blind, System’s built to break us, but we fight and rewind, Echoes of my ancestors whisperin' in my soul, Tales of survival, yeah, they make me feel whole. (Verse 3) Cops in the rearview, but I’m dodgin' the hate, Every corner got a story, every block got a fate, From the shacks to the towers, we’re chasin’ the light, In this struggle together, we ignite the night. (Verse 4) Lost brothers in the game, but their spirits remain, We carry their legacy, through the joy and the pain, So I pen these verses, let the world hear my cry, Raw truth in my words, like a phoenix, I fly. or
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