its alright but you started your verse where the chorus goes , try and hear the beat a bit more and ride with it . check what i did with this same beat and you will see what i mean by the chorus and the verse . keep grinding though can only get better my dude
Respect 🤜🤛
Not bad but remember make sure your voice is 3 meters away from the mic so I can hear you with more clarity
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this wasnt to bad kid
keep practicing and you will
get alot better as you go
and keep consistent
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Impression: On point 🎯
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its alright but you started your verse where the chorus goes , try and hear the beat a bit more and ride with it . check what i did with this same beat and you will see what i mean by the chorus and the verse . keep grinding though can only get better my dude
just talk a little bit louder brother that sounds good buddy just need a lil work Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Nice 🌟
Be louder put more energy in it as well
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this wasnt to bad kid keep practicing and you will get alot better as you go and keep consistent Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: On point 🎯
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