Broke

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Broke

(Verse 1) Woke up this morning, pockets feelin' light, Checkin' my account, man, it ain't lookin' right, Bills stackin' up, like they tryna start a fight, Dreams of gettin' rich, but I'm stuck in the night. Workin' two jobs, but it ain't what I dreamed, eyes on the prize, but it’s harder than it seems, Runnin' through the struggle, tryna build up my team. (Verse 2) Countin' every penny, man, I’m watchin' my moves, Life’s a game of gotta play it, no lose, But when you’re broke, man, it’s hard to choose. Friends say, “Stay strong, keep pushin' through the pain,” But when your wallet’s empty, it’s hard to feel the gain, Still I rise, though the struggle’s insane, Got my eyes on the future, I’m breakin' every chain. or

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11 months ago

(Verse 1) Woke up this morning, pockets feelin' light, Checkin' my account, man, it ain't lookin' right, Bills stackin' up, like they tryna start a fight, Dreams of gettin' rich, but I'm stuck in the night. Workin' two jobs, but it ain't what I dreamed, eyes on the prize, but it’s harder than it seems, Runnin' through the struggle, tryna build up my team. (Verse 2) Countin' every penny, man, I’m watchin' my moves, Life’s a game of gotta play it, no lose, But when you’re broke, man, it’s hard to choose. Friends say, “Stay strong, keep pushin' through the pain,” But when your wallet’s empty, it’s hard to feel the gain, Still I rise, though the struggle’s insane, Got my eyes on the future, I’m breakin' every chain. or

11 months ago

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11 months ago

You're on the right track, keep going! 🛤️ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥

11 months ago

I'm Shook 😱

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