fiction to me

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fiction to me

on the edge, im trippin. on the ledge im slippin. holding on im grippin. even with these addictions afflictions fallins not an option deFEET is justa fiction. to me, these heights I stare down. tell me I don't got flights of stares down. now, the feats ive accomplished are in the distance. you cant tell me I'm not different. when the times change i get to shifting. The chains i break are how I flip it. Life is how I script it. Write it down as I listen. Chosen, voices tell me that I'm gifted. Shit gets hard I get DRASTIC, I won't stop until I get it. the fact is ill take it to the ends before.i piss it all away. but some dayson the edge, im trippin. on the ledge im slippin. holding on im grippin. even with these addictions afflictions fallins not an option deFEET is justa fiction.

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1 year ago

I like the beat and the flow seems on point but it is hard to hear what you are saying. You have to either work on your delivery and say the lyrics louder or you gotta crank the volume on the vocal all the way up. The track seems to be well-written or whatever but it did no good if we can't hear what you are saying, feel me? Keep grinding and creating, don't let my critique discourage you. Peace 🕊️. --BiG QUe$T. Keep grinding ✊ ISSA MOVIE 🎥 Champion 🏆 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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