brighter days

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taking life one step at a time I swear your constantly on my mind Thinking so much I get in my head Wishing you were here instead so Take another bottle to the head I'm up so much I can't sleep your love has me so weak I know I'm needy for your passion But girl your the best that's ever happened to me One thing leads to another We both meet each other's mothers and Now I'm lost like no other putting my feelings undercover so I Can find another lover pretend life is good when i suffer 2 . I would really have to say I always thought of one day that maybe things would change but it's still the same there ant no sunshine in this dark cave that tends to remain I can't help I'm hiding all this pain I do it for the smile on your face and I look to sky and pray that their will be brighter days

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David Anderson

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1 year ago

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Amirah Hopkins

9 months ago

keep going man your doing amazing 🔥 👏 🤩

Ju Vital

9 months ago

keep grinding and keep pushing you got this 💪🏿💯🎤

Ritc

1 year ago

turn your voice up lil more ...Gas ⛽️ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

O.D.O. Wanny

1 year ago

🔥 Great track! Keep the fire coming! 🔥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

1 year ago

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Kerei💕

9 months ago

ISSA MOVIE 🎥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Obey

9 months ago

Flowed 🔥🔥💪🫡 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Gemini

9 months ago

Incredible flow, your rhymes are straight flames🔥no cap! 🎤💥 Wild 🤪

BneNew

10 months ago

I feel it! 🤜🤛 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯