pain itself
I’m standing in the shadows, memories collide, Watchin' the struggle, feelin' pain, can’t hide, Echoes of the past, like a ghost in my mind, Days when the fists flew, love was hard to find. Heart heavy, scars deep, they don’t fade with time, Each bruise a reminder, a silent crime, I see the world suffer, it’s a mirror of me, Reflections of the broken, trapped in agony. They say “move on,” but the weight’s like a chain, Every tear that I shed, pours down like rain, Lost in the darkness, where the shadows creep, Haunted by the memories that never let me sleep. When I hear their cries, it cuts like a knife, A cycle of pain, can’t escape this life, Tryna break the chains, but the grip’s so tight, In a world full of struggle, I’m still ready to fight.
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let's goo gang keep cooking up you got this
thanks so much I'm very happy with this app and really happy that I can finally put up music
First track and already dropping bombs! 💣💥 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Now that's what we're talking about @fergusmackie, Nice job on your first track 'pain itself '! 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 4. There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 6. Post a longer track so we can really give you some detailed thoughts. 7. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Send your next track to hot so we can see how you took our tips on board!💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Your verses are real, big respect, spitting truth and holding it down! 🎩🔥 SLEPT ON 😴