expressing the spirit explicitly

It's tough to change the rhythm without hearing the music, but here's a suggestion for the outro that might add a bit more punch: Verse 1 (Weight of the world on my chest, keep reppin' it up) on the grind, no time to stop, no time for 2nd best Weight of the world on my your chest, Haters can talk, but never gonna drop rising above, watch me soar, watch me pop, pop op op Ay yo ay yo Verse 2 (Weight of the world , keep reppin' it up) ain't no game, this ain’t no Nintendo playing for keeps I'm breaking the mold, shattering the stereotypes Write your own script Let me speak , 🗣️ Chorus (Weight of the world on your chest, I keep reppin' it up) force of nature, unstoppable, on the rise Like a shining light, illuminating the skies A survivor, gonna win this fight Outro (Weight of the world on my chest, I keep reppin' it up) a legend in the making not gonna let anything stop me, breaking the chains Like phoenix rising from the ashes, I aint a force to be reckoned with, dont fuck with me boy 👦 it’s your boy g letting go, dropping the mic in from my god dam hands, peace. Until we meet again boyz This gives a bit more structure and repetition, and it also emphasizes the "weight of the world" theme.