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(Verse 1) My dreams shattered, hopes in tatters I'm feeling lost, like nothing else matters I used to believe in a brighter tomorrow But now it feels like I'm drowning in sorrow (Chorus) Broken dreams, shattered hopes I'm struggling to cope But I won't give up, I'll keep on fighting I'll rise from the ashes, I'll keep on striving (Verse 2) I had big plans, I had high hopes But now it feels like I'm at the end of my rope I thought I could conquer the world But now I'm just another broken soul, unfurled (Chorus) Broken dreams, shattered hopes I'm struggling to cope But I won't give up, I'll keep on fighting I'll rise from the ashes, I'll keep on striving (Bridge) I refuse to let this defeat me I'll rise above, just wait and see I'll rebuild my dreams, piece by piece I won't let this setback define me, I'll find peace (Chorus) Broken dreams, shattered hopes I'm struggling to cope But I won't give up, I'll keep on fighting I'll rise from the ashes, I'll keep on striving (Outro) I may be broken, but I'm not defeated I'll keep on pushing, I won't be depleted I'll rebuild my dreams, stronger than before I'll rise from the ashes, watch me soar.
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