tight flow... Delivery is a lil monotone. UT the flow is straight bounce... great beat choice... smooth mixing by the engi... consider doubling up the main verses with secondary full verse tracks to make the vocals sound more full in both ears ie. low in the background. Not sure if you're reading the lyrics or not but if so it would be the cause of the monotone.. always take time to memorize then record.. memorizing allows one to deliver the energy needed to keep people feeling what yoursaying.. if you read many times ones brain is focused on reciting and reading and it can be heard In the vocals. If you did memorize it try getting angry mentally and focusing your delivery there and Into the bounce of the song..
great bars and great flow! looking forward to hearing more! -Chris
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tight flow... Delivery is a lil monotone. UT the flow is straight bounce... great beat choice... smooth mixing by the engi... consider doubling up the main verses with secondary full verse tracks to make the vocals sound more full in both ears ie. low in the background. Not sure if you're reading the lyrics or not but if so it would be the cause of the monotone.. always take time to memorize then record.. memorizing allows one to deliver the energy needed to keep people feeling what yoursaying.. if you read many times ones brain is focused on reciting and reading and it can be heard In the vocals. If you did memorize it try getting angry mentally and focusing your delivery there and Into the bounce of the song.. great bars and great flow! looking forward to hearing more! -Chris
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