Melting-EyeScream
Am Luz#Melting- #EyeScreAM ________________________ Underneath the sun, summer, cone in hand, Yeah we run (I’m not a runner.) Colors swirl like dreams yeah they do seem, oh no—but it's melting! The eyes 👀SCREAM !!!🗣️ Melting ice cream, drips down my hand, Sweet memories slipping like grains of sand. Laughter/Echoes with every sweet taste, But the clock’s ticking faster; there’s no time to waste. Chocolate rivers mix with vanilla skies, Every bit holds a world that flies. Sticky fingers /giggles burst free; But as its melting— I see the ripples Melting ice cream under blazing heat, Hold it tightly—or it's bittersweet. Each droplet whispers what we once lost There up in the heat—in the moment we’re choosing to be what to be . I’m just choosing another beat🎵 But I’m just melting like ice cream. So take your scoop before it's too late, Let’s dance ‘round this fate while we here up to celebrate. With sprinkles of joy in every gleam— We’ll savor these seconds despite the scream! Melting ice cream but every heart stays brighter, Then I see Even through chaos—or the shining its lighting. We’ll chase down delighting ,this fleeting dream: Forever we'll remember—the melting of ice cream! Eyes scream Melting of ICE! Sundae in the sunshine, colors bright and bold, Chocolate drips like memories that never grow old. Holding tightly to my cone, sweet dreams on hot days… But without a home , it’s slipping faster away. Oh, melting ice cream, my heart starts to scream, Underneath the blazing, lost in a creamy dream. With each drop that falls down like tears on pavement of faults, #iceCream 🍦🫠 Sprinkles ✨ scatter 'round me like star up in the sky, As I chase those flavors swirling as they wave goodbye. Vanilla swirls of laughter turn into puddles small; In this warm summer evening are we bound to lose it all? Felt cold as a ghost .
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Yo @amluz, We listened to your track 'Melting-EyeScream', here's our report! 📝 Track Artwork ⭐️ Track Length ⭐️ Title ✅ Description ✅ Bars ✅ Cadence/Flow ✅ Delivery 🛠 Vibe ✅ Concept ✅ Trending ⭐️ Recording quality 🛠 Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎 ⭐ - Feature Worthy ✅ - Good Start 🛠 - Needs Improvement
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