NIGHTMARES OF MY FIRST FELONY

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(Verse 1) Wakin' up cold on the pavement, no blanket, Dreams in my mind, but the world's feelin' vacant. Stomach growlin', got me searchin' for a meal, Hustlin' hard, gotta grind, gotta make it real. (Verse 2) Streetlights flicker, but my vision stay bright, Every step I take, fightin' through the night. Homeless but I’m rich in spirit, can’t break me, Life's a puzzle, every piece helps shape me. (Verse 3) Got my eyes on the prize, ain't no time for defeat, Every struggle I face is a step to my beat. From the gutter to the stars, I’m risin’ like the sun, Hard times only fuel the fire, I’m not done. (Verse 4) Remember days when hope felt like a dream, Now I’m chasin’ goals, buildin’ my own team. With every scar I wear, I’m stronger than before, Motivated by the hunger, watch me break down doors.

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ShizzaShark Entertainment

7 months ago

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2 years ago

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2 years ago

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2 years ago

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2 years ago

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2 years ago

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1 month ago

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1 month ago

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Isabella

4 months ago

Your verses are like a lyrical workout! The strength is in the persistence! 🎤💪

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4 months ago

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