Amen contest $$$$
yeah u can talk yo shit if u wanna talk til yo ear to the floor and they linin u with chalk my dick soft for these pussies cuz i aint givin no fucks they talkin bout my flow the type u get from the rough u get from the dust yeah this some shit u never seen i flow so clean im mean and my rhymes supreme but fuck that shit enough of dick ridin my flow lets talk about this one time when i would smoke on the low i used to take them lil crumbs and lace em up with the cigs and i would sleep through the high so no one knew what i did shit i was a kid but best believe that i knew better but not enough to keep me from the crumbs that fell when theyd measure but im doing better im tired of the crumbs and shit id rather make bread and cheese than be a bum and shit of runnin shit urge to pop a gun and shit go dumb and shit go kill a kid for drugs and shit cuz fuck that shit i know my life still filled with some worth i got many years ahead of me to change on this earth love to disperse im tired of all the problems but i know to be a better man i gotta go and solve em man i gotta go dissolve em cuz the problems arent solvin and i feel like its dishonoring to die because of sorrow so i gotta go revolve around desicions that i made before the judgment day comes and father lord starts to relay over the life that i done lived full of my devilish sins so i gotta go amend rather trying to pretend that im a fake motherfucker i came from the gutter papa wasnt home so depending on my mother i understood the struggle never came close to her pain so ima sing this in the rain to let understand i cant help her out just how she needs because her son got some needs and hes trying to escape yeah hes just tryin to be free im tryin to be me but times it feels like its impossible i gotta be a man and stand up for all my honor i was praying for u momma but u fucked up when u turned to that bitch that got u drama filled and took u from yo fuckin kids he stole ur soul and u still wont let that pussy go like what the fuck that pussy just a bum and shit mama if u only knew the rage i feel the hate and the pain the sadness and disgrace i feel the stains i feel upon my chest i cant sit still it makes my head hurt and i aint got no pills makes me wanna go on a hunt bite scratch and kill tear shit down and stomp him with the both my heels theyll never understand the pain that i got stored in my chest the devilish mind that takes me back to hell and shit but i admit i didnt really try my best but dont attest *[ran out of time]*
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yeah u can talk yo shit if u wanna talk til yo ear to the floor and they linin u with chalk my dick soft for these pussies cuz i aint givin no fucks they talkin bout my flow the type u get from the rough u get from the dust yeah this some shit u never seen i flow so clean im mean and my rhymes supreme but fuck that shit enough of dick ridin my flow lets talk about this one time when i would smoke on the low i used to take them lil crumbs and lace em up with the cigs and i would sleep through the high so no one knew what i did shit i was a kid but best believe that i knew better but not enough to keep me from the crumbs that fell when theyd measure but im doing better im tired of the crumbs and shit id rather make bread and cheese than be a bum and shit of runnin shit urge to pop a gun and shit go dumb and shit go kill a kid for drugs and shit cuz fuck that shit i know my life still filled with some worth i got many years ahead of me to change on this earth love to disperse im tired of all the problems but i know to be a better man i gotta go and solve em man i gotta go dissolve em cuz the problems arent solvin and i feel like its dishonoring to die because of sorrow so i gotta go revolve around desicions that i made before the judgment day comes and father lord starts to relay over the life that i done lived full of my devilish sins so i gotta go amend rather trying to pretend that im a fake motherfucker i came from the gutter papa wasnt home so depending on my mother i understood the struggle never came close to her pain so ima sing this in the rain to let understand i cant help her out just how she needs because her son got some needs and hes trying to escape yeah hes just tryin to be free im tryin to be me but times it feels like its impossible i gotta be a man and stand up for all my honor i was praying for u momma but u fucked up when u turned to that bitch that got u drama filled and took u from yo fuckin kids he stole ur soul and u still wont let that pussy go like what the fuck that pussy just a bum and shit mama if u only knew the rage i feel the hate and the pain the sadness and disgrace i feel the stains i feel upon my chest i cant sit still it makes my head hurt and i aint got no pills makes me wanna go on a hunt bite scratch and kill tear shit down and stomp him with the both my heels theyll never understand the pain that i got stored in my chest the devilish mind that takes me back to hell and shit but i admit i didnt really try my best but dont attest *[ran out of time]*
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ok I see your idea and your story is deep and I can see that you is a thinker and if keep grinding you can be on your way cause you is one of the greatest
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Your verses are like a lyrical workout! The strength is in the persistence! 🎤💪
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