Aloha
Beast mode ready, Money on confetti, Hard work sealed me in Rap Fame forever, Climbed from the bottom, Fought 'em in the middle, Rose to the top from the scars Little by little, Tough to reach the followers Started 'em with a nickel, Before I spit the fire It all started with sizzles, Told myself I had to be sick Den a hospital Joined a tournament and won Then my followers double tripled, Battles waitin' on me Accepted and dominated, So many rappers slept on me I was so underrated, You can’t accept a win If you losin' ain’t celebrated, Take a loss and shake it off That will turn into motivation, I don’t beg for nothin' I fight for the crown daily, No matter who in front me I’m holdin the crown lately, I hope to see you soon I’ll be waitin to see your name, Without further a due It’s a pleasure from Rap Fame Welcome.
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Beast mode ready, Money on confetti, Hard work sealed me in Rap Fame forever, Climbed from the bottom, Fought 'em in the middle, Rose to the top from the scars Little by little, Tough to reach the followers Started 'em with a nickel, Before I spit the fire It all started with sizzles, Told myself I had to be sick Den a hospital Joined a tournament and won Then my followers double tripled, Battles waitin' on me Accepted and dominated, So many rappers slept on me I was so underrated, You can’t accept a win If you losin' ain’t celebrated, Take a loss and shake it off That will turn into motivation, I don’t beg for nothin' I fight for the crown daily, No matter who in front me I’m holdin the crown lately, I hope to see you soon I’ll be waitin to see your name, Without further a due It’s a pleasure from Rap Fame Welcome.
This is just the beginning, keep it up! 🚀 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
yeah I know that was something I was trying to say it but with trying to sing it
ok try putting more effort on the voice beat
killed it 💪 slime 🧊 cold 🥶 legendary 🌪️
make ityeah I need all the help and advice I can get to make it more smoother
Hey @808pochobone, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give you some tips on 'Aloha'! 💥 1. Flows are just as important as bars, practice HOW you wanna spit them bars! 🗣 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 5. Did you know we have lots more Masterclasses to choose from? There's harder ones too if you're looking for more of a challenge! 💯 Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
The delivery could be improved, but I dig the track! 🙌 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯