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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

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2 years ago

You're on the right track, keep going! 🛤️ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥

2 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @et3bf6wtso, Nice job on your first track 'him'! 1. Spend some time on your vocal levels - it's important to find a balance between the beat and your bars! 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 4. To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! 5. This was a nice taste, but we're gonna need a longer track if you want us to give you detailed feedback! 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Keep perfecting your sound, we'd love to hear you progress on your musical journey! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

W song

2 years ago

GANG GANG 🤘

2 years ago

Gas ⛽️

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