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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Yo @a6oacoudzh! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'first try'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 4. We think this track could use a little extra spice. Try out our vocal FX rack to give your track a little something extra. 5. Great but too short! Give us something longer and we can send you some real feedback. 6. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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