YaBoyPj
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•2 months ago
Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself
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This is just the beginning, keep it up! 🚀 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @gxij9kbhun! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'YaBoyPj'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Flows are just as important as bars, practice HOW you wanna spit them bars! 🗣 2. Some eye-catching cover art can draw new people to your music! 🎇 3. You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! 4. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! 5. Make the step up to the Rap Fame Studio to produce a full track! Send your next track to hot so we can see how you took our tips on board!💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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