this is your best work I've heard so far. this has hints of a rhyme scheme that can be complex. like the hook. the wop on this shit hard tho. your voice was amazing. my critiques on this one are, I think some work on flow on this particular song will clear up missed lyrics. also this still needs scheme work. not necessarily rapping faster or changing tone. but I want to hear more punchlines and story. overall 8.5/10
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this is your best work I've heard so far. this has hints of a rhyme scheme that can be complex. like the hook. the wop on this shit hard tho. your voice was amazing. my critiques on this one are, I think some work on flow on this particular song will clear up missed lyrics. also this still needs scheme work. not necessarily rapping faster or changing tone. but I want to hear more punchlines and story. overall 8.5/10
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