this is my furst
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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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🎶 Awesome first track! You're on the right path! 🙌 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
Now that's what we're talking about @phrue0maws, Nice job on your first track 'this is my furst'! 1. Practise 🙏 - If you don't get it first time, no worries, you can always give it another go! 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Try adding some of the in-app effects to your next track to take it to a whole new level. 4. This was too short to give you any proper feedback, can you drop something a bit longer? 5. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Overall this junt eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥