I'm feeling lost, my heart is broken
I'm feeling lost, my heart is broken Tears fall like rain, words unspoken Thoughts swirl in my mind, emotions choking Can't escape the pain, it's like a token Love turned to hate, trust shattered Promises broken, dreams scattered Heartache grips me, feeling battered Wish I could rewind, fix what's tattered Memories haunt me, can't let go Pain cuts deep, moves slow Heart in pieces, feeling low Trying to heal, but it's a tough row But I'll rise up, stronger than before Won't let this heartache leave me sore I'll find my peace, open a new door Heartbreak won't define me, I'll soar. I'm feeling lost, my heart is torn in two Thought you were the one, but now I'm feeling blue You played me like a fool, I can't believe it's true Now I'm sitting here, wondering what to do Tried to give you everything, but you threw it all away Now I'm left here broken, with nothing left to say You said you loved me, but it was all a lie Now I'm left here hurting, trying not to cry I gave you my heart, but you broke it in two Now I'm left here wondering what I should do Thought we had something special, but I guess I was wrong Now I'm left here broken, trying to stay strong I'll pick up the pieces, and move on from this pain I won't let you bring me down, I'll rise above the rain I'll find someone who truly cares, someone who won't break my heart But for now, I'll heal myself, and make a brand new start part
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I'm feeling lost, my heart is broken Tears fall like rain, words unspoken Thoughts swirl in my mind, emotions choking Can't escape the pain, it's like a token Love turned to hate, trust shattered Promises broken, dreams scattered Heartache grips me, feeling battered Wish I could rewind, fix what's tattered Memories haunt me, can't let go Pain cuts deep, moves slow Heart in pieces, feeling low Trying to heal, but it's a tough row But I'll rise up, stronger than before Won't let this heartache leave me sore I'll find my peace, open a new door Heartbreak won't define me, I'll soar. I'm feeling lost, my heart is torn in two Thought you were the one, but now I'm feeling blue You played me like a fool, I can't believe it's true Now I'm sitting here, wondering what to do Tried to give you everything, but you threw it all away Now I'm left here broken, with nothing left to say You said you loved me, but it was all a lie Now I'm left here hurting, trying not to cry I gave you my heart, but you broke it in two Now I'm left here wondering what I should do Thought we had something special, but I guess I was wrong Now I'm left here broken, trying to stay strong I'll pick up the pieces, and move on from this pain I won't let you bring me down, I'll rise above the rain I'll find someone who truly cares, someone who won't break my heart But for now, I'll heal myself, and make a brand new start part
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