Yo @j1na9vb7zk!
Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'she mine🖕🏿'! 💥
Here's some words of advice on the next one:
1. Spend some time on your vocal levels - it's important to find a balance between the beat and your bars!
2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great!
3. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧
4. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying.
5. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇
Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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you can do better
lit Keep practicing make you're voice louder and then the beat down a lil bit
🎶 Awesome first track! You're on the right path! 🙌 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @j1na9vb7zk! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'she mine🖕🏿'! 💥 Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. Spend some time on your vocal levels - it's important to find a balance between the beat and your bars! 2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 4. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. 5. Try entering one of our weekly contests for the chance at winning the $500 grand prize! 🥇 Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Nice 🌟
Keep up the work! A few more improvements and you onto a banger! 💥