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Verse 1: Yo I'm here in Los Angeles, the city of dreams Where the palm trees sway and the sun always beams I'm cruising down Sunset, feeling so alive With the top down low, I'm ready to thrive Verse 2: I'm repping the West Coast, where the gangstas roam In the land of the stars, where legends are born I'm grinding every day, trying to make it big In this concrete jungle, I refuse to dig Verse 3: I'm spitting rhymes on the mic, like a true G With a flow so smooth, they all wanna be me I'm staying true to myself, never selling out In this game of life, I'm the one they talk about Verse 4: So come and catch me if you can, I'll be here all day In the heart of LA, where the players play I'm living life to the fullest, no regrets in sight I'm the king of the city, shining so bright

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2 years ago

Verse 1: Yo I'm here in Los Angeles, the city of dreams Where the palm trees sway and the sun always beams I'm cruising down Sunset, feeling so alive With the top down low, I'm ready to thrive Verse 2: I'm repping the West Coast, where the gangstas roam In the land of the stars, where legends are born I'm grinding every day, trying to make it big In this concrete jungle, I refuse to dig Verse 3: I'm spitting rhymes on the mic, like a true G With a flow so smooth, they all wanna be me I'm staying true to myself, never selling out In this game of life, I'm the one they talk about Verse 4: So come and catch me if you can, I'll be here all day In the heart of LA, where the players play I'm living life to the fullest, no regrets in sight I'm the king of the city, shining so bright

2 years ago

great job with this track keep up the good work πŸ‘

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2 years ago

yo homie nice track keep grinding on the right side of the platform and you'll get there practice today perfect tomorrow much luv respect check me out πŸ’₯πŸ’¨πŸ“Š

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2 years ago

you need to work on your style lyrics are dope

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2 years ago

✨ Impressed by your debut! Keep the creativity flowing! 🎡 Bars: Dope πŸ”₯ Delivery: Dope πŸ”₯ Impression: Great πŸŽ‰

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2 years ago

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