hope
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•5 months ago
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
🙌 Your lyrics are raw and real, keep it up! 💥🎤 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
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