Carmen Massey
Carmen Massey

Shooting for the stars

Shooting for the stars

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5 months ago

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

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5 months ago

Hey @nchmlraajw we liked your track 'Shooting for the stars', We're so happy you're joining the Rap Fame Community, so here's a couple tips from us: 1. Spend some time on your vocal levels - it's important to find a balance between the beat and your bars! 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ❤️‍🔥 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 4. Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. 5. Can you give us a bit more? This was too short for us to give you real feedback. 6. Get immediate feedback on your track with Judge 4 Judge! You and another user simultaneously provide feedback for each other's track, helping you to level up on your next drop! 💥 Try joining a crew to build with other artists, we hope you share your music with the Rap Fame Community again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

5 months ago

Shooting for the stars I'm an astronaut you say that you're a goat I put you in a curry pot I get it popping like a fist full of dread locks on a clean beat I get funky as a gym sock they don't know I'm ill til they test me I lay so many bars My vocab looks arrested God flow, I can get on a track and bless it side shows, I call my competition They ain't ready I'm cold as the winter soldier Avengers Bucky a bad man but I'm out the cage like a trustee hello Rap Fame, it's your poster child bout to renovate cuz I plan to be here a while so ya better learn my name like the school teacher cuz I'm bout to run the game I'll see you in the bleachers you can't see me like my mode is stealth I'm ahead of my time, dont get ahead of yourself

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