Cold
#ColdByBRACKENZ (Intro) As I gaze up above, I'm reminded what I cannot love, Because this eternal chain, Anchors me in ash and pain. I yearn to break its cruel embrace, To soar again, with gleeful grace, But gravity will never yield, Like my heart has never healed. You meant so much, you left a cavity. Now I can't escape your gravity. -- (Intro 2) Maybe I'm okay Maybe I'm fine Maybe I'm so afraid we'll never make it in time Maybe I'll go insane before she changes her mind Maybe I'll just take a blade and retry this life our creator designed Maybe a knife in the brain would make it alright I don't know, I shouldn't be saying these lines I should be taking some time to let myself face away from her bind It's just so hard to escape it sometimes -- (Verse 1) I feel like the past that we had Meant so much, and we laughed at the thought it was actually bad We loved eachother, nothing mattered but that Yet somehow when it cut down to the time that we lucked out you sat up and packed Said it was my fault matter of fact You didn't try to help us gather our act We didn't get a chance to master the class But instead let it fail like a battery pack My world fell apart like shattering glass How can I gather my last Words when thoughts are scattering past I couldn't speak at all when catastrophe crashed It's sad to me that you let it all go when the path hit a crack Then again, what if she was right She said I'm fed up with you're need to fight I only wanted just to keep her sights On us but what if the uptight Bounderies were a sea of might That never let us heal and reunite Separated by the fear of losing the one I love to an easy height I apologize for the sleepless nights All the times I made you feel despite The real intentions were to heal us right I hope you realize what it's really like To have someone who can treat you right I'm sorry what I did, didn't mean to try To argue with you over teeny types Of nonsense I wish we denied -- (Chorus) Am I wrong am I right I don't know All I know is you're the one I wanna hold It's cold in my mind in my home Need your love but you're already over Now we're getting older I wish you were closer But I'm getting colder -- (Verse 2) Going through life Like a boat stuck in ice Try to move on but I'm holdin' my eyes Closed, it's quiet and cold in the mind If only the price that I owed wasn't silence and holding inside every moment that I was imploding but why Why do I feel like the only one I've Ever loved is the one over the sky Too far to go when you're frozen in ice I try the phone might open it twice Hoping for life on a mobile device I feel like my mind has broken and died Nobody might even notice me cry I'm all alone in the cold of the night No light in the zone I reside so I hold the microphone like it's the only sight -- (Chorus 2) Cold, dark I gave you my whole heart You gave me these old scars Engraved in my soul I'm cold Frozen in snow I'm Cold I'm Cold
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#ColdByBRACKENZ (Intro) As I gaze up above, I'm reminded what I cannot love, Because this eternal chain, Anchors me in ash and pain. I yearn to break its cruel embrace, To soar again, with gleeful grace, But gravity will never yield, Like my heart has never healed. You meant so much, you left a cavity. Now I can't escape your gravity. -- (Intro 2) Maybe I'm okay Maybe I'm fine Maybe I'm so afraid we'll never make it in time Maybe I'll go insane before she changes her mind Maybe I'll just take a blade and retry this life our creator designed Maybe a knife in the brain would make it alright I don't know, I shouldn't be saying these lines I should be taking some time to let myself face away from her bind It's just so hard to escape it sometimes -- (Verse 1) I feel like the past that we had Meant so much, and we laughed at the thought it was actually bad We loved eachother, nothing mattered but that Yet somehow when it cut down to the time that we lucked out you sat up and packed Said it was my fault matter of fact You didn't try to help us gather our act We didn't get a chance to master the class But instead let it fail like a battery pack My world fell apart like shattering glass How can I gather my last Words when thoughts are scattering past I couldn't speak at all when catastrophe crashed It's sad to me that you let it all go when the path hit a crack Then again, what if she was right She said I'm fed up with you're need to fight I only wanted just to keep her sights On us but what if the uptight Bounderies were a sea of might That never let us heal and reunite Separated by the fear of losing the one I love to an easy height I apologize for the sleepless nights All the times I made you feel despite The real intentions were to heal us right I hope you realize what it's really like To have someone who can treat you right I'm sorry what I did, didn't mean to try To argue with you over teeny types Of nonsense I wish we denied -- (Chorus) Am I wrong am I right I don't know All I know is you're the one I wanna hold It's cold in my mind in my home Need your love but you're already over Now we're getting older I wish you were closer But I'm getting colder -- (Verse 2) Going through life Like a boat stuck in ice Try to move on but I'm holdin' my eyes Closed, it's quiet and cold in the mind If only the price that I owed wasn't silence and holding inside every moment that I was imploding but why Why do I feel like the only one I've Ever loved is the one over the sky Too far to go when you're frozen in ice I try the phone might open it twice Hoping for life on a mobile device I feel like my mind has broken and died Nobody might even notice me cry I'm all alone in the cold of the night No light in the zone I reside so I hold the microphone like it's the only sight -- (Chorus 2) Cold, dark I gave you my whole heart You gave me these old scars Engraved in my soul I'm cold Frozen in snow I'm Cold I'm Cold
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@codexp Dropped the track, lemme know what you think
yeah yeah you can also use me for the remix
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