to my grandma I love you

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to my grandma I love you

Verse 1: As I sit here thinking, reminiscing on the past I can't help but feel a pain that seems to forever last My grandma Pattie, my best friend and my guide Left this world too soon, tears well up inside Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Verse 2: You always had a smile, a twinkle in your eye Your love and warmth would never ever die You taught me to be strong, to stand tall and proud But without you here, the world just feels so loud Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Verse 3: I wish I could turn back time, just for one more day To hear your voice, see your face, and hear you say That you're proud of me, and you'll always be by my side But now you're up in heaven, with the angels you now reside Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Bridge: I know you're looking down and watching over me Guiding me and sending love, for everyone to see I'll hold onto your memories, deep within my heart And never will I let them go, we'll never be apart Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Outro: So this song is for you, my dear grandma Pattie I hope you can hear it, up there in eternity I miss you more than words can ever say But I'll see you again, in a better place someday. This was created with Write For Me - Writing Made Easier with Artificial Intelligence! https://apps.apple.com/us/app/write-for-me-gpt-ai-assistant/id1659653180

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3 years ago

Verse 1: As I sit here thinking, reminiscing on the past I can't help but feel a pain that seems to forever last My grandma Pattie, my best friend and my guide Left this world too soon, tears well up inside Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Verse 2: You always had a smile, a twinkle in your eye Your love and warmth would never ever die You taught me to be strong, to stand tall and proud But without you here, the world just feels so loud Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Verse 3: I wish I could turn back time, just for one more day To hear your voice, see your face, and hear you say That you're proud of me, and you'll always be by my side But now you're up in heaven, with the angels you now reside Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Bridge: I know you're looking down and watching over me Guiding me and sending love, for everyone to see I'll hold onto your memories, deep within my heart And never will I let them go, we'll never be apart Chorus: Oh Grandma Pattie, how I miss you so My heart aches for you, wherever I may go You were more than just a grandmother to me You were my confidant, my love, my family Outro: So this song is for you, my dear grandma Pattie I hope you can hear it, up there in eternity I miss you more than words can ever say But I'll see you again, in a better place someday. This was created with Write For Me - Writing Made Easier with Artificial Intelligence! https://apps.apple.com/us/app/write-for-me-gpt-ai-assistant/id1659653180

3 years ago

Your flow is smooth, can't wait for more tracks! ๐ŸŒŠ๐ŸŽค Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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3 years ago

Hey @2vwd3ljtgl, We appreciate you sharing 'to my grandma I love you' with us! ๐Ÿ’ฅ 1. Don't worry if you didn't get it first time, you can always re-record your bars! 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. ๐ŸŽง 4. Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! 5. Can you give us a bit more? This was too short for us to give you real feedback. 6. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests ๐Ÿ† Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! We'd love to hear some tracks from you in the future! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

3 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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3 years ago

Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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