astronaut

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i feel like an astronaut so high in the clouds we all got our ins and out but baby I feel inside out dont shut me out u shoutin to much my eyes are floodin feel like they gonna drought so no more words are comin out my mouth thoughts about all the times we had great laughs even put em on my vows thought I'd read them out but guess i took them out nah i threw them out now they in the clouds turned them to ashes took my ring back

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🕊️ youngflu 🕊️

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3 years ago

O.D.O. Wanny

3 years ago

This is just the beginning, keep it up! 🚀 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @youngflu, Nice job on your first track 'astronaut '! 1. For your next studio track, try editing your audio clips directly in the studio to remove any unwanted sounds! 2. Remember to be true to yourself - authenticity always makes the best tracks! 💯 3. Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! 🔥 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

BeeTree

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

E6-Liv3 (🦾)1NC

2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

bigmoneyyo

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Big Mike

3 years ago

Respect 🤜🤛