You have to put my effort in your bars when you're writing it's shocking and it makes me it's pretty good but I felt like you could have actually got more creative with your bars as writing creatively instead of being one of the usual you get what I'm saying when you make music you have to say the impact so you have to say stuff that people are not saying that's what catches people's attention when you style increases that's when people start looking at you
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Now that's what we're talking about @ogog17711,
Nice job on your first track 'come as they come'!
1. Don't worry if you didn't get it first time, you can always re-record your bars!
2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps!
3. Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§
4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance!
5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track!
6. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests π Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme!
We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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You have to put my effort in your bars when you're writing it's shocking and it makes me it's pretty good but I felt like you could have actually got more creative with your bars as writing creatively instead of being one of the usual you get what I'm saying when you make music you have to say the impact so you have to say stuff that people are not saying that's what catches people's attention when you style increases that's when people start looking at you Bars: Nice π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
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Groovy vibes! Looking forward to your next release! π΅ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Great π
nice track keep doing what you do πͺππͺ
Now that's what we're talking about @ogog17711, Nice job on your first track 'come as they come'! 1. Don't worry if you didn't get it first time, you can always re-record your bars! 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. π§ 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests π Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! We hope to hear some more from you in the future, we would love to hear how you take our advice on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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