cold streets (repurposed)
On these cold streets, where hope is hard to find, Surviving day to day, with dreams left behind, The concrete's my pillow, and the alley's my bed, A life full of struggles, just trying to get ahead. No silver spoon, just a pocket full of pain, Where the game is survival, in the pouring rain, But we all have a story, and this one's mine, Living on the streets, where the sun don't shine. (Chorus) Living on these streets, where the darkness prevails, Tales of desperation, and drug deals and trails, But I won't let it break me, I won't be confined, I'm gonna rise above it all, against the grind. (Verse 2) The corners are crowded, with hustlers and fiends, Lost in a cycle, of shattered hopes and dreams, Addicted to the poison, it's a battle within, But I'll fight for my freedom, let the journey begin. I've seen friends fall, seen lives torn apart, But deep in my soul, there's a burning heart, A fire of resilience, and a spirit that's strong, In this concrete jungle, I'll prove 'em all wrong. (Chorus) Living on these streets, where the darkness prevails, Tales of desperation, and drug deals and trails, But I won't let it break me, I won't be confined, I'm gonna rise above it all, against the grind. (Verse 3) I've felt the pain, but I'll break these chains, Find a path to redemption, in spite of the rains, There's hope in these alleys, and strength in my stride, I won't let the streets, be the place where I hide. I'll rewrite my story, create a brand new page, Rise from the shadows, and step on the stage, 'Cause the streets can't define me, I'm more than my past, I'll overcome the darkness, and make it my last. (Chorus) Living on these streets, where the darkness prevails, Tales of desperation, and drug deals and trails, But I won't let it break me, I won't be confined, I'm gonna rise above it all, against the grind.
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On these cold streets, where hope is hard to find, Surviving day to day, with dreams left behind, The concrete's my pillow, and the alley's my bed, A life full of struggles, just trying to get ahead. No silver spoon, just a pocket full of pain, Where the game is survival, in the pouring rain, But we all have a story, and this one's mine, Living on the streets, where the sun don't shine. (Chorus) Living on these streets, where the darkness prevails, Tales of desperation, and drug deals and trails, But I won't let it break me, I won't be confined, I'm gonna rise above it all, against the grind. (Verse 2) The corners are crowded, with hustlers and fiends, Lost in a cycle, of shattered hopes and dreams, Addicted to the poison, it's a battle within, But I'll fight for my freedom, let the journey begin. I've seen friends fall, seen lives torn apart, But deep in my soul, there's a burning heart, A fire of resilience, and a spirit that's strong, In this concrete jungle, I'll prove 'em all wrong. (Chorus) Living on these streets, where the darkness prevails, Tales of desperation, and drug deals and trails, But I won't let it break me, I won't be confined, I'm gonna rise above it all, against the grind. (Verse 3) I've felt the pain, but I'll break these chains, Find a path to redemption, in spite of the rains, There's hope in these alleys, and strength in my stride, I won't let the streets, be the place where I hide. I'll rewrite my story, create a brand new page, Rise from the shadows, and step on the stage, 'Cause the streets can't define me, I'm more than my past, I'll overcome the darkness, and make it my last. (Chorus) Living on these streets, where the darkness prevails, Tales of desperation, and drug deals and trails, But I won't let it break me, I won't be confined, I'm gonna rise above it all, against the grind.
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