Shays first (beginner)🥇
don't come around with the bullshit cuz we all been known to loose it and if you think u gonna win this fight you really fucking stupid you can try me anytime but bitch I promise you'll look foolish i don't like to be fighting but I will if i gotta do it I got this fire up inside me these bitches never like me I can't talk to my mother so I talk to my diary why y'all like comin around pretending I start thinking about just quiting wishing shit would for once be different man I stay in my damn feeling sitting around just reminiscing all I ever wanted was to reach my goals in life but growing up it got to the point where I was on my own raising my siblings like I was their mom now we're pretty much all grown trying to find some way to make that money cuz I never had it easy trynna get my Id but how am I gonna to do that if my mother never really like me had to drop out early I never did finish school started breaking all the damn rules I guess at first I thought it was real cool but I wish I only fucking new all the ups and downs and just all the shit I've been through something that a kid should never have to fucking do it all started when my daddy had left before my mama could ever give birth to me I don't know why but he never really wanted shit to do with me but forget all that now im fucking grown had to make it on my own that shit only made me strong cant let these fools knock me out my zone I'm so tired of going through this pain What the fuck do I gain When every time I start to win I end up loosing everything My mommas locked up in jail My pops in a prison cell My brothers got took to Man you serious what the hell I guess all I can do is just keep them in my prayers wondering why things gotta be the way they do the shit ain't fair I've tried to be a better person and start doing right I've fought my whole damn life on my own from day to night reminiscing about them good times wishing I can go back in time sitting all alone cuz I ain't got nobody on my side I'm just so fucking sick and tired I just wish i could get a job so i can finally get a crib and ride but every time i tried to get the shit i need I just ended up getting robbed man i swear this gotta stop im sitting here trying to make this song my mind is blown didn't think you would leave me like this but I was wrong now I'm all alone don't have nowhere to call home out here in the streets like I'm grown the way you did me you know that shit was wrong but it's all right though I'm going to Job corps it's been my go since I was like five though yeah I've had the same goes for a long time hoe you said you love me but that was a lie though I love to how you play games with my mind we were supposed to be a team and spend a lot of time thinking about how we could be together for life have a baby together and maybe your wife but now it's just memories its the past my heart is broken in half but it'll pass I'll just have to work hard on moving on from that
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don't come around with the bullshit cuz we all been known to loose it and if you think u gonna win this fight you really fucking stupid you can try me anytime but bitch I promise you'll look foolish i don't like to be fighting but I will if i gotta do it I got this fire up inside me these bitches never like me I can't talk to my mother so I talk to my diary why y'all like comin around pretending I start thinking about just quiting wishing shit would for once be different man I stay in my damn feeling sitting around just reminiscing all I ever wanted was to reach my goals in life but growing up it got to the point where I was on my own raising my siblings like I was their mom now we're pretty much all grown trying to find some way to make that money cuz I never had it easy trynna get my Id but how am I gonna to do that if my mother never really like me had to drop out early I never did finish school started breaking all the damn rules I guess at first I thought it was real cool but I wish I only fucking new all the ups and downs and just all the shit I've been through something that a kid should never have to fucking do it all started when my daddy had left before my mama could ever give birth to me I don't know why but he never really wanted shit to do with me but forget all that now im fucking grown had to make it on my own that shit only made me strong cant let these fools knock me out my zone I'm so tired of going through this pain What the fuck do I gain When every time I start to win I end up loosing everything My mommas locked up in jail My pops in a prison cell My brothers got took to Man you serious what the hell I guess all I can do is just keep them in my prayers wondering why things gotta be the way they do the shit ain't fair I've tried to be a better person and start doing right I've fought my whole damn life on my own from day to night reminiscing about them good times wishing I can go back in time sitting all alone cuz I ain't got nobody on my side I'm just so fucking sick and tired I just wish i could get a job so i can finally get a crib and ride but every time i tried to get the shit i need I just ended up getting robbed man i swear this gotta stop im sitting here trying to make this song my mind is blown didn't think you would leave me like this but I was wrong now I'm all alone don't have nowhere to call home out here in the streets like I'm grown the way you did me you know that shit was wrong but it's all right though I'm going to Job corps it's been my go since I was like five though yeah I've had the same goes for a long time hoe you said you love me but that was a lie though I love to how you play games with my mind we were supposed to be a team and spend a lot of time thinking about how we could be together for life have a baby together and maybe your wife but now it's just memories its the past my heart is broken in half but it'll pass I'll just have to work hard on moving on from that
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Now that's what we're talking about @shannonbeech, Nice job on your first track 'Shays first (beginner)🥇'! 1. Try testing out different flows! Even if you got your rhythm down, changing it up can add some extra spice to any track! 🌶 2. Rap music is about the whole package! 📦 Be sure to show off all the skills that make you great! 3. Quiet 🤫 - make sure you record in a quiet place and make sure you use those 🎧 for the best results. 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 We'd love to hear some tracks from you in the future! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎
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