I just keep rhyming my way thru life
i dont know what im doing or who i am fooling i just keep rhyming my way thru life and see where i and, do i have a wife? i dont know i dont know i just dont know how who i am speaking to who i am reaching to i am an uneducated dude i dont wanna be rude you dont wanna be a... fuck ypurself with a carrot flute to my died soldiers a big salute you have a very big mout i put you on mute fuck you with youre photo very nude youre a perv, go on deepnude psycho, why yo, eat some mayo dont fuck with me do, do dododont fuck, with me yea i aint from the underground, i come straight from upstairs, out ma basement, i aint trying to get a placement i do this shit for fun making fun of you and never that i am going to run even if you shoot me with a stun gun you can beat yourself with youre big fat bum aint chewing on some gum erase my words of pencil with a gum youre so fucking dumb dont understand ma shit, its easy listen to eazy-e-rase i dont care about youre color or race, there aint one for me, even if youre fucking red and your chill, ima like you but not in that way for my wife ima stay in ma bed ima lay with words ima playyyy you dont wanna fuck with me, who am i fooling, wich girl am i doing this girl is a witch who the fuck is fooling who ima jump out of this window of 7feet high, ima survive, or ima dive straight to heaven but when i sang locked out of heaven i thought i couldnt go to heaven beacause i was sour as lemon pure black, feeling like a venom
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i dont know what im doing or who i am fooling i just keep rhyming my way thru life and see where i and, do i have a wife? i dont know i dont know i just dont know how who i am speaking to who i am reaching to i am an uneducated dude i dont wanna be rude you dont wanna be a... fuck ypurself with a carrot flute to my died soldiers a big salute you have a very big mout i put you on mute fuck you with youre photo very nude youre a perv, go on deepnude psycho, why yo, eat some mayo dont fuck with me do, do dododont fuck, with me yea i aint from the underground, i come straight from upstairs, out ma basement, i aint trying to get a placement i do this shit for fun making fun of you and never that i am going to run even if you shoot me with a stun gun you can beat yourself with youre big fat bum aint chewing on some gum erase my words of pencil with a gum youre so fucking dumb dont understand ma shit, its easy listen to eazy-e-rase i dont care about youre color or race, there aint one for me, even if youre fucking red and your chill, ima like you but not in that way for my wife ima stay in ma bed ima lay with words ima playyyy you dont wanna fuck with me, who am i fooling, wich girl am i doing this girl is a witch who the fuck is fooling who ima jump out of this window of 7feet high, ima survive, or ima dive straight to heaven but when i sang locked out of heaven i thought i couldnt go to heaven beacause i was sour as lemon pure black, feeling like a venom
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good bars bro but put more emotion in yo voice it sound dry but good bars and you are on beat Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Nice π
so I really like the fact that you copy and pasted all of your lyrics into the description for us, work as complete as this is going to be expected of you when you get big so I'm glad to see that you were step ahead, I think that your style is very relaxing which is something that not a lot of people can pull off so I think there's a lot of potential in that, honestly if any of your other work can relate to this I can see you becoming really popular really fast, nicely done RESPECT π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π―π₯π―π₯π―π₯ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Yo @niswe! Waddup. Thanks for sharing your song 'I just keep rhyming my way thru life '! π₯ Here's some words of advice on the next one: 1. For your next studio track, try editing your audio clips directly in the studio to remove any unwanted sounds! 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! β€οΈβπ₯ 3. Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. π§ 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! π² Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! π Keep uploading tracks for the chance to be added to our editors Playlists! π₯ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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