okay so respectfully, there are parts of this I absolutely love, and there are parts of it that I think you should redo, it's because of the parts that I love that I know you could perfect this whole track, you have a killer voice you have ambition you picked the beat and you made a track, you sang your heart out, this track shows off your potential, and parts of your talent, but I need to see all of your talent and all of the places so you don't get f***** up later on down the line when you're trying to put this work out and people are listening to it. all in all though it's a great check it shows that you have potential and it shows that you have talent. if you care for any more tips go ahead and message me and I'll tell you what I think. until then nicely done RESPECT 🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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