My Life Story 1

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My Life Yo Olation in the Studio I guess it's a good day I gad a story to tell Ever since you died I hav'ben running in circles Wndring when my Life will open Like an ocean, longing for happy potion My life hav'ben like poison tinted with Shame and Failure like oilman's suit I tried a formal root but it gad me nowhere, I guess it's a warfare Everything you left behind they gad it all Mom I guess my future is in my hands now mom I never had the chance to say goodbye mom I suspect that is what has'ben killing me mom

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Omaatla Outule

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3 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @omaatlaoutule, Thanks for the sharing 'My Life Story 1', here's our two cents on uploading tracks to Rap Fame! 💥 1. Try using the rhyme generator to develop even more on your first rap! ✍️ 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. Try adding some of the in-app effects to your next track to take it to a whole new level. 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! 5. We're gonna need a longer track if you want some feedback! 6. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 We'd love to hear some tracks from you in the future! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame team 😎

Touxvillen

11 months ago

KILLED IT 😵

JBDaGodd

3 years ago

👍 Bars: Can improve 👏 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

🧊blu iCe🧊

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

De'Mar

3 years ago

Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉