Hard reality (intro)

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Hard reality (intro)

i'm falling asleep, i see you, like death, you go away, i follow you, you flee me, why you, come back to me, this nightmare, i've had it up to here, but suddenly, you come back, in your arms, yes i'm fine and,and suddenly nothing, the light returns as soon as you wake up, end of dreams,in the dark, i think only of you,i miss you so much ×2 i'm looking for you , with out any help,yet you are there, right next to me,i want to see you now ×2 i do not want, because with you,i could be, really me,i continue, with abuse,to imagine, that you stayed,but a chimera, short-lived,hit me, of truth, suddenly my heart trembles, i can't feel my legs anymore The loss of a loved one is often brutal but you have to know how to let go

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3 years ago

i'm falling asleep, i see you, like death, you go away, i follow you, you flee me, why you, come back to me, this nightmare, i've had it up to here, but suddenly, you come back, in your arms, yes i'm fine and,and suddenly nothing, the light returns as soon as you wake up, end of dreams,in the dark, i think only of you,i miss you so much ×2 i'm looking for you , with out any help,yet you are there, right next to me,i want to see you now ×2 i do not want, because with you,i could be, really me,i continue, with abuse,to imagine, that you stayed,but a chimera, short-lived,hit me, of truth, suddenly my heart trembles, i can't feel my legs anymore The loss of a loved one is often brutal but you have to know how to let go

3 years ago

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3 years ago

Now that's what we're talking about @starlight95, Nice job on your first track 'Hard reality (intro)'! 1. For your next studio track, try editing your audio clips directly in the studio to remove any unwanted sounds! 2. Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 3. Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! 4. Try mixing up different light studio effects on your vocals to give your track the perfect sound every time. 🎤 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! 6. Le son est trop court, on attend quelque chose d'un peu plus long pour donner un vrai commentaire! 7. Now you've done your first track, get some feedback from established judges on how to improve through Judge 4 Judge! 💎 Keep perfecting your sound, we'd love to hear you progress on your musical journey! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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3 years ago

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