First debut

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Qu'est-ce qui ne va pas ont t'a parlé de ça t'as pas écouter ta préféré fait pour toi aujourd'hui tu subir demain tu vas survivre ainsi va la vie c'est pas une maladie mais une mélodie je me rappelle elle m'a dit un mardi avant de partir elle ne peut pas me mentir triste réalité t'as même pas idée de ma souffrance quand je pense à mes frère qui sont en France français ou anglais English forever faut que tu te réveil t'as longtemps dormir faudrait pas qu'on te domine c'est la vie ainsi va la vie réveil toi et avance le meilleur c'est devant réveil ton potentiel montre de quoi tu es capable et agis sans peur et craindre *2

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3 years ago

Vago Valdez

3 years ago

i cant speak the language but it sounds good Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Jaysoo x $auce

3 years ago

Keep grinding you'll get somewhere trust me ✨

Emcee Valereo

3 years ago

keep worken n it homie Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Perfect 💯

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3 years ago

thank, merci i speak French but i like English

kayrocjay

3 years ago

Turn your vocals up bro. Use the reverb. Keep going

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @elvisvianney, Thank you for sharing 'First debut' with our community 💥. Here are a few words to the wise from us: 1. Don't rush - we know how exciting it can be to record your first track, but try to take your time to get the most out of the studio! 2. Sound quality is key when it comes to music! Make sure your track is the best quality you can achieve before posting your tracks! 3. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 4. Defo try out our denoise feature to minimize any background noise on your track! 🤫 5. Why not upload or record a video to go along with your music, that way you could get featured on the Popular Video section! 📸 Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

NatirSRE

3 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯