broken heart

Big bus

Author

3 years ago

We used to smoke on that cart we both got high then you broke my heart and I felt like I want to die Brock my hart like you thro a dart at it it now I’m an attic you thought it would only hurt a little bit and I started to get out of fit back in the day I was a joy we used to be used to be so highly now I’m in my bed wishin I was dead wish I never had that card. You hurt me in a bad part. Yeah it was my heart. If you could take one guess how do you think I am like? I’ll be rhyming all these lyrics. I got no Pham still I’ll be trying wishing I was dying. Yeah I’m Cryan you don’t need to worry about me in this world I don’t mean anything I’m like a Dombey

Cashhead Fox

3 years ago

dope bars keep grinding Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Good 💛

G-M-C

3 years ago

BOMB! 🧨 COLD 🥶 Go for it good luck bud Word Up ⬆️

❌𝐒𝐔𝐏𝐑𝐄𝐌𝐄❌

3 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @bigbus.8795860, We're gonna drop some tips for your track 'broken heart'. Let's get it! 1. Try testing out different flows! Even if you got your rhythm down, changing it up can add some extra spice to any track! 🌶 2. The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 🌟 3. Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! 🎧 4. Keep experimenting with vocal effects! Sometimes less can even be more! 😲 Test different effect levels and settings to find the best balance! 5. There's a $1,000 prize pool in our weekly contests 🏆 Think you got what it takes? Try creating a track based on this week's theme! Submit more for feedback from us and community to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jbanny

3 years ago

FIRE 🔥 Bars: Good 💛 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏